The beat is too flat for the real hardstyle and the track is a little too generic imo, without a 'earworm', it's a little empty, like a demo... like you haven't any ideas, but still wanted to create a track (maybe I'm wrong, but it's just my version). But no doubt that you have perspectives in music making. You already got some skills and if you will work more, you could create something interesting in the future. The main thing when creating is that you have to come with a more concrete ideas for the track, with some real ideas... well, hope you'll understand what I mean... maybe you need a parthner, who will help you to add something more to the tracks you made... well, anyway, I'm sure that you have some skills and you can create cool compositions in the future. Go on!!