Well, I would recommend doing more work on it. You can never make a song any worse by working on it more, plus you can pick up little tricks a long the way. Trust me, the more you work on songs, the more time you end up spending on it overall. I started off making songs once every few days, now I spend everyday working on techno music....along with my other instruments and musical skills. I'll have an online single up soon, mp3 format. It's coming out pretty good so far.
shoot-outs go out to the following: Hayden, Aurimas, Patty G (good music), Scooter, Dj Metazero, Brink-of-time, Djcaster, DJ gokey, and all fans of Techno and Rock.