thanks for the feedback mate

yeah ive just noticed myself about the piano,i used nexus 2 make it,that already has reverb and delay on it but ill can try and put a bit extra on it

ive accidently moved the piano to right by mistake i will sort that too,your the first one to notice so thanks

. the bass in my main riff is what im finding most difficult with,ive been using massive to make it,but only made one layer,i know thats not enough,so i will take what you said and add one more layer of the raw saw you said and try that

the drop that i did at 2.34 was very difficult to do believe it or not

a lot of automation i did on it as its only really a baseline,the idea was to get it rapidly fast sounding and it pitch it down gradually to match the speed of the kick when it comes in,but as u said a bit of fx or filtering will make that better

i appreacate you taking time to listen and give me constructive critism,thats all i ever want,its the only way to lear and make things better for future producing

thanks very much fella