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for the lazybones:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DnB_ID5jtBE

and for the better quality:

http://rapidshare.com/files/210273808/TheSister.mp3


what do you think? I'm looking for Ideas of improvement to finish this song soon. Would really like to get some feedback :-D
This song just HAVE to be good and i'm saying this not without reason
Hope the person will like it....


greetings, Delta

any other comments or ideas???

@ traxx: thx

Here is something guess called final.. maybe.. we will see

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Av0dIcIoQY

http://rapidshare.com/files/210809299/TheSister.mp3

Nice start
Then the pads Are too low and dont sound good. The hat line is a good one. The melody that appears after that is very gentle and pleasant. Alont with the toms and the stronger gated lead it reminds me of BT - Godspeed.
Its deffinitely a track with a character
The bassline is soft and deep and I like it alot. Then there are some strings in a very beautiful melody. Your best ability is composition at this moment.
The low pads are the only thing here I dont Like.
At 3:40 there are too many instruments playing. The arps in the background should be cutoff and it will not be as annoying. The shout after that is a nice idea and its good, but next time you should shout it even louder and you shouldnt care about waking the neighbours from their nap.
This is your best track so far. It was a nice experience listening to it.

So I dont like the pads and the title Thats all