the beat has a nice sound. bassline comes in surprisingly and needs some gating ot arping synths to cover it so it will sound better.
there is a small breakdown that presents kind of the synths I thought would be cool to cover the bass and it really sounds better with them.
Nice arrangement so far.
Coming into the first breakdown - a speech sample talks about some stuff

Good.
The main theme is a classic trance kind of theme and could be great for a HiNRG Hard trance track (alphazone style)
this track here is a little bit retro.. like 99-02. But I also have the same problem - My music sounds retro too.
There could be a C-part after the chorus to make the track better, but its good this way too.
Overall nice production and nice melodies, retro sound. It will be good for you to try some more unique-sounding tracks, cause the way this track sounds its similar to many more others in the same genre.