H.T.J.V. "S.I.X. H.O.R.S.E.S./H.A.R.D."

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Dave From Sheffield

Volvo. A car you can believe in.

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Saturday, December 20th 2008, 10:45pm

H.T.J.V. "S.I.X. H.O.R.S.E.S./H.A.R.D."

Hi all!

It's been a long time since i've last posted new music here. But now here's something for you! A few words about this release:

The name "six horses" comes from our familys horses. When i first started making this track, we still had six horses but a few weeks ago one of them died

But as a memory i wanted to keep this title

And of course it's dedicated to our five ones, i love them so much!

Then we have "H.A.R.D.", a typical track from me. The bass during the mainmelody is something that i'm proud of, hehe. After this comes the b-side "Equus", which is jumpstyle more or less. It gives a happy feeling and the title suits with the first track :wink:

Anyway, i hope many of you will download and listen these tunes. And naturally i would like to have some feedback! So here you go:

H.T.J.V. "S.I.X. H.O.R.S.E.S./H.A.R.D."

01.S.I.X. H.O.R.S.E.S. 09:24
02.H.A.R.D. 08:36
03.Equus 04:03

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The Great Duck

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Saturday, December 20th 2008, 10:48pm

Downloading right now

EDIT: Listened to S.I.X. H.O.R.S.E.S. now. Here's my short view:

- The loop at the beginning reminds me of running horses, was this intended?

- At around 2:06 the bassdrums sorth of ''breaks'' and doesn't sound so powerful.
- At around 3:01 when the bassline arrives at the end of a bar it makes a click sound (at least for my ears)
- At around 5:03 the melody and the bassdrum collide a bit causing more clicks.
-The main melody is quite nice, could have used some more...SAKSASOUNDIAAAH! (famous german saw or something

) :twisted: But it fits this track better as it is now

-The whole track sounded quite dry, you should have added some small reverb.
-The kick could have some variety
-Stereofield! Please spread the instuments, there's so much room left

Overall I'd rate this track 7/10

Now I'll move on to the H.A.R.D.!

EDIT 2: Listened to H.A.R.D. and was positively surprised

A few points:

-Bassdrum at the beginning really belongs to your style and that's good
- At around 3:39 the rising mainmelodyloop disturbs the reapeating melody a bit
-The bass which plays at the same with the main melody sounds very good, but could have used some variety, even if only two notes changed
-The mainmelody begs for volume fadeout when it goes away

-At the end I miss the mainmelody, it hooked me

For this track 9/10

And now to Equus...

EDIT 3: Equus done

-You could slice those loops and arrange the pieces a bit differently, would sound muuuch better then

-A small delay for the bassline at the beginning could maybe help it to not sound abrupt when it plays at the highest part
-Simple but fun track

-Supersaw, yay! But sadly it doesn't play for long...

Overall 8/10

I hope you benefit from my review

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Gee Tee Age

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Saturday, December 20th 2008, 11:29pm

the track contains two mellodies. and those mellodies are hardly melodic. and since there is no variety, for example experimenting with a few instruments or automating some of the parameters of a sound or beat, you should cut this track to max 2:30.
your beats sound good, if you were in a production team, you would have been in charge of creating the drum section. however there is nothing good in the track except that.
im sorry about being a little har sch, but i remember that the most har sch comments about my music helped me alot in the past!

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Dave From Sheffield

Volvo. A car you can believe in.

Posts: 9,369

Location: Finland

Saturday, December 20th 2008, 11:45pm

Thanks for your comments!

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Dave From Sheffield

Volvo. A car you can believe in.

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Location: Finland

Wednesday, December 24th 2008, 9:32pm

So... more feedback would be nice

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Davay

Lada Samara, former user ''Davay''

Posts: 197

Location: Finland

Saturday, December 27th 2008, 2:08pm

Yeah, I downloaded this..

Good!

I LOVE RUSSIAAAAAAAAAAAA
Lada SAMARA for the life!

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Traxx

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Posts: 19,406

Location: N - Europa

Sunday, December 28th 2008, 2:57pm

Downloaded, listened and judged :lol:

S.I.X. H.O.R.S.E.S.;

- The loop in the beginning reminds me about running horses, as I'm Raving wrote :wink:
- Cool effects, sounds and bass, and nice melodies.

Generally, a nice track, though not exactly my style.

Because of the lenght, and the spread of the different parts of the song, it turned out a bit boring to me.
If it were like 6-7 min, and the different parts were more "compact" and/or mixed, if you get it, I think it could be a bit better, at least for me.

Also, I think some experimenting/ more use of different beats could make it better.
About the same as TheBassLizard said.

Overall; 6/10

H.A.R.D.;

- Again, cool effects.
- Nice bass, melodies and mixing.

Pretty much the same as on S.I.X. H.O.R.S.E.S., but I pretty much like this track better.
Again, this track is a bit too long, and get's a little boring, but I like it better than the first one.

Overall; 8/10

Equus;

- Very good effects, sounds and melodies in this track.
- Nice variety and mixing.

This is definietly the best track on this single, absolutely good.
This one could very well have been a minute or so longer :lol:

Overall; 9/10

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