Well, as I promised, my comment on this one.
Just downloading the file ...
I have to say that I'm listening to it on little pc speakers
(it's the computer of my dad)
so I'll don't comment the mix.
When I'm at home later I listen to it again
on the studio speakers and give you my
opinion to it via pm if you want.
Ok, it starts:
Nice loop ... and this synth is also good.
The Bass/Kick starts and that's a point
where I can recognize that your sound has
improved.
Much better than that old bass from your
trance atlantic remix. (I didn't like it)
Now there's the break. Sounds quite nice.
the loop coming up. Now the "baaaass" sample
And a really nice melody starts.
Could emagine very well to dance to this track in a club.
All in all good.
I think there are some mixing mistakes in it.
But I'll write you a pm about this cause I'll
have to check it out later on my own speakers.
and increase loudness in soundforge or other, in ozone 3) good plugin ) 
