in my opinion, this would be better if there were some variation to the tune used in the original, or if you took a different format.
Changing the speed was good, and I like the Chorus part a lot, that is probably the best part of the remix, even if it uses the same notation, it sounds different and nice...everything else seems like it could be changed or a different line-up of the song could have been used.
This is your song though, and make it the way you like it, but when I remix songs I might keep some of the same tune here and there, but try to be creative with my remixes...my latest remix on my sectionz page would show that, that is the way i like remixes...but if you listen to a lot of scooter remixes, some people can do good remixes without changing any tunes or sample sounds.
Ramp (jay frog) remix didn't really change any melodies or samples, but the way he constructed the song made it good.
This would a lot better with some variation, even a change in the order of each musical part (verse, chorus, etc).
Keep up the good work, I know music production isn't easy.
shoot-outs go out to the following: Hayden, Aurimas, Patty G (good music), Scooter, Dj Metazero, Brink-of-time, Djcaster, DJ gokey, and all fans of Techno and Rock.
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